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Thursday 7 June 2018

How does the story end


when Miritha went onto the police vehicle and suddenly run out of it and almost kill herself,
but she ran and ran, (“4 HOURS LATER”). she ran into a cave and lost the police and she heard
a growl and when the growl got louder louder louder louder louder  louder!!!! then she ran out with
a scream and started shooting stuff ( “don’t ask me how she got a gun” ) then there was a sudden
BOOM! There was a car outside waiting there, there was no one out there, then when she stepped out of the
cave…………. Nothing happened so she started the car up and the police was right behind her they started
shooting (“ that's where she got the gun” ) she shoots back and forth back and forth and………… she
turned with a scrape on a rock and the police BLEW UP ( “you should of seen it it was hot.” ) and then
she got a new job it was……. Kill the cops ( “she made it herself so it technically it’s not a job.” ) and
she went on a killing spree and most of the people got killed well that's the…….. BANG!!!!!!!! HA!!
HA!! HA!! HA!! HA!!

2 comments:

  1. Hi David
    Can you reformat this post so that we can read your entire story? Please make sure that the content is appropriate for your school blog.
    - Miss Birtch

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