Wednesday 12 September 2018
Mr Chelsea's Greenhouse blog post.
Eva complains that Mr Chelsea's mad, but she has to work with him for the rest of the summer! What will she do? She soon realises that Mr Chelsea is not mad but kind and the summer is flying past like a bird, she really wants to help him more. When Mr Chelsea is sick she soon finds out how to keep water by having a rain water can to store all the water that he does not have.
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Kia ora David! I liked reading your writing about Mr Chelsea. All of your full stops and capital letters were in the correct places. That is excellent! I wonder if you could have another look and add some more detail to tell your readers what the task was and what you were completing this work for. It is a little bit unclear what the context is.
ReplyDeleteI will subscribe to this post so if you reply to my comment when you have fixed it up, I can take another look!
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