New Years
5 days before we did New Years camping we were heading to sams and brookes place.my
Brother and Sister and I didn't know were we were going but we were told by sam that
we were going to Lake Tekapo for New Years. So we helped Brooke and Sam to pack their
bags so we could leave earlier.
When we were finished packing we loaded the car and went off on the start of our adventure.
We drove for about 2 hours then stopped in at Burger King, I got a cheese burger, chips,
nuggets, chicken fries, normal fries and a drink of fanta and ice. When we got there I
Shouted “FINALLY WE ARE HERE!” but I was wrong we ended up spending about 20
minutes finding a place to set up camp. We finally found a place then we played near the water
and I built a little house out of rocks, clay and water, I made a pool for the fish. When we go
there next time I hope it won't take too long to find the same place. I finally find a place to
build another house but I couldn’t do it then because we needed to go to the store to buy stuff.
It has been 4 days since we arrived and we were up at midnight, while we were up we saw
shooting stars.
Reflection:
I think that I created an interesting piece of writing because… it was about hanging out with
my family.
For next time I could spend more time on… thinking on how I would make it more
interesting.
In my writing, I would like to improve… on my words and what to say in my story.
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